You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it?

Dear Alex, I hope
this
letter
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you well. I am writing
this
letter to bring to your attention
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my shifting out of
this
flat I have been promoted to a business development manager position by my firm, and I have been
assgined
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assigned
to perform my
further
duties in my company's branch office, which is located in the east end of our city and I will be shifting out by
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of
this
month. Speaking about my shifting decision, the distance of my new work location is almost a 30KM
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side
from
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this
place.
Although
I have been issued with the company's vehicle, It will not be a viable option for me to commute to and from my current residence, because
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certain reasons,
such
as, I will be working round the clock,
therefore
, I will have to leave my workplace later at night in order to cop-up with new work
responsibilites
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responsibilities
.
Furthermore
, travelling
this
far,
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in peak hours will consume my precious hours, which I can actually utilize by creating some happy moments with my family.
Although
moving to a different location will
initially
bring a
lot
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stress on me,
however
, the opportunity that I have been honoured with, will drain
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the entire stress out of me. It has been
few
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years
,
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since I was waiting for
this
opportunity, and I am truly delighted
bto
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to
finally
have it now. I am looking forward to
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my career with the right knowledge and resources, which I will be getting through
this
position.
However
, I will be missing out
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you
oftenly
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often
.
Nevertheless
, I will still make my way to meet you bi-weekly on the weekends. I hope to
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you soon to elaborate
further
on my future plans. Thank you Regards Alex
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