You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it?
Dear Alex,
I hope
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find
you well. I am writing Change the verb form
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this
letter to bring to your attention Linking Words
about
my shifting out of Change preposition
apply
this
flat
I have been promoted to a business development manager position by my firm, and I have been Linking Words
assgined
to perform my Correct your spelling
assigned
further
duties in my company's branch office, which is located in the east end of our city and I will be shifting out by Linking Words
end
of Correct article usage
the end
this
month.
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side Change preposition
from each
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this
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Although
I have been issued with the company's vehicle, It will not be a viable option for me to commute to and from my current residence, because Linking Words
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certain reasons, Add the comma(s)
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therefore
, I will have to leave my workplace later at night in order to cop-up with new work Linking Words
responsibilites
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responsibilities
Furthermore
, travelling Linking Words
this
far, Linking Words
specially
in peak hours will consume my precious hours, which I can actually utilize by creating some happy moments with my family.
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however
, the opportunity that I have been honoured with, will drain Linking Words
out
the entire stress out of me. It has been Change preposition
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a few
,
since I was waiting for Remove the comma
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this
opportunity, and I am truly delighted Linking Words
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to
finally
have it now. I am looking forward to Linking Words
excel
my career with the right knowledge and resources, which I will be getting through Change the verb form
excelling
this
position. Linking Words
However
, I will be missing out Linking Words
meeting
you Change preposition
on meeting
oftenly
. Correct your spelling
often
Nevertheless
, I will still make my way to meet you bi-weekly on the weekends.
I hope to Linking Words
meeting
you soon to elaborate Change the verb
meet
further
on my future plans.
Thank you
Regards
AlexLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite