You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, •Say what your interest is •Explain why the website is unclear •Request the information that you need Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses

#college #course #cost #duration #subjects #website #email #person #admissions #points #•say #interest #•explain #•request #information #‘dear #addresses

Dear Mr Smith, I’m interested in the 3D Modeling

course

for Architecture

this

year.

In addition

, I have seen your name and contact detail on the college website. Unfortunately, some specific details like cost and the beginning time of courses are not clear. From

this

point of view, I have several questions for you and I hope you can help.

Firstly

, in terms of the cost 80 $.unfortunately, it is not clear. To put it more simply, that price is for each month or whole the term.

Moreover

, that does not clarify the ways of payment. There is no more explanation for that. In addition, the website has a variety of unnecessary data which they are not related to the

course

for instance

, annoying advertisements and so on and so forth.

Secondly

according to

the website in the architectural section, I need more details about the

course

like the subjects that will be taught and the name of the lecturer is really important for me. Simply because I want to peruse my work with that teacher in the future. More importantly, I want more resources to buy before the

course

such

as E-books and magazines. Thank you for your help, and I look forward to receiving the information requested. Kind Regards, Kambiz Pirzad

Submitted by kambiz.pirzad on Thu Jul 20 2023

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