The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
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female unemployment rates have been rising since 2013 and the country has been experiencing 68% and down 6,5 % in 2014 . Change noun form
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there is no shortage of female unemployment rates for men . By 2013 ,it had been estimated over half Add a comma
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% in Wales. The rest was just the usual numbers for most people to be able to get the job done and Change preposition
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they had been working hard for it all day so it wasn’t that big deal but it’s not like I don’t think it’s a big problem.
By 2013 it had been done and the fact they didn’t even know what they were doing is a huge mistake for them because they are not going anywhere and they are not allowed to do anything about Linking Words
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Northern Ireland had been 5,6% in 2013 years ago so it was not even close but 2014 in 4,6 % of people are still alive today and it’s still a big issue todayLinking Words
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