The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Female
unemployment
changed in 2013 and 2014. Unemployment
percentage
decreased in England, Wales and Northern Ireland.
Unfortunately,in Scotland unemployment
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percentage
growed
. In 2013 England was Correct your spelling
grew
country
where Correct article usage
a country
unemployment
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the unemployment
percentage
was higher. But in 2014 this
percentage
a little decreased. In Wales from 2013 was a normal percentage
of unemployment
. Fortunately, 2014 has become even less. Northern Ireland’s unemployment
percentage
was a little more than Wales
in 2013. Change noun form
Wales's
Wale's
And in
2014 became the country with the smallest Correct word choice
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percentage
of unemployed of all four. Only in Scotland persentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
unemployment
increased
. Replace the word
increase
Therefore
, they became the most unemployed country in 2014.
We can observe that in three countries carelessness decreased, only in Scotland it increased.Submitted by dnm.best on
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