The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table provides information on
amount
of students Add an article
the amount
attended
different types of Secondary Correct pronoun usage
who attended
schools
from the year
2000 to the year
2009. Overall
, Community Schools
have witnessed a
rapid growth Correct article usage
apply
whereas
, rest
of the Correct article usage
the rest
Schools
have seen an immense drop in admission by the end of the period
.
At the beginning of the period
, Voluntary-controlled Schools
had the most pupils which were at 52% however
, it started to shrank in attendance by
the following years and by the Change preposition
in
year
2009, it was around 20%. Moreover
, Grammar schools
and Specialist Schools
also
observed the same impact and by the end of the period
, they also
depleted to less than 12%.
Furthermore
, Community Schools
were the only school which showed substantial growth in admission throughout the period
. In the year
2005, it jumped to approximately 20% increase and by the year
2009, it became the first school to have almost 60% pupils.Submitted by Melroy on
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