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The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The table provides information on
amount
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the amount
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 of students
attended
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who attended
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 different types of Secondary
schools
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 from the
year
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 2000 to the
year
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 2009.
Overall
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, Community
Schools
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 have witnessed
a
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apply
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rapid growth
whereas
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,
rest
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the rest
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 of the
Schools
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 have seen an immense drop in admission by the end of the
period
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, Voluntary-controlled
Schools
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 had the most pupils which were at 52%
however
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, it started to shrank in attendance
by
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in
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 the following years and by the
year
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 2009, it was around 20%.
Moreover
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, Grammar
schools
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 and Specialist
Schools
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also
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 observed the same impact and by the end of the
period
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, they
also
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 depleted to less than 12%.
Furthermore
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, Community
Schools
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 were the only school which showed substantial growth in admission throughout the
period
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. In the
year
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 2005, it jumped to approximately 20% increase and by the
year
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 2009, it became the first school to have almost 60% pupils.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, year, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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