You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that I purchased a red coloured iPhone 14

pro max

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Pro Max

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worth 500 dollars

having

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, having

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256GB internal storage and 6

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ram

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RAM

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last

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week through your website. I would like to thank the delivery team

that

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apply

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received

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delivering

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it within a few days after the order.

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, it was not as same as advertised on the website. Because on the online portal

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, in

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the

description

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description,

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it mentioned a red-coloured iPhone 14

pro max

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Pro Max

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with 256GB internal storage and 8GB

ram

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RAM

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but

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what I have received is a bit different

than

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from

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what is exactly mentioned in the product description. I would be more delighted if you could either provide me with a full refund or replace a new phone with the same product description which was stated in the advertisement. Should you require any

further

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information

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information,

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please do not hesitate to revert. Regards, Shiba Kumar Banjara

Shiba Kc

Jul 20, 2023

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coherence

Have one clear point in each paragraph; put ideas in order.

task response

Say what you want the firm to do and by when, and keep a kind tone.

content

You say what you bought and what the ad said.

tone

Polite start and end.

content

You ask for money back or a new phone.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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