People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Urban
community has several problems which they face in their daily Add an article
The urban
lives
. For these problems, the state can motivate them to move
to suborb
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suburb
suburbs
areas
or regional towns
while
facilitating basic requirements for people
are are
unwilling to Remove the redundancy
apply
move
to the
Correct article usage
apply
towns
beyond the city. People
have a right to decide where they need to stay and take the previlages
from the government Correct your spelling
privileges
privilege
while
spending their lives
according to
their wishes.
Most of the people
in large cities
live in apartments or in flats because of less space in the city. Some of them have quality apartments or flats even though some of them have
not relevant space to live Add a missing verb
do have
according to
the family size or basic needs. For example
, some poor families live in small houses though they have more family members. Therfore
, they are suffering from stress and anxiety since they do not have Correct your spelling
Therefore
proper
place to relax. Add an article
a proper
However
, if they do not prefer to move
to the
other places, they need to request some opinions from relevant authorities to Correct article usage
apply
fulfill
their basic requirements Change the spelling
fulfil
such
as food sanitory
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sanitary
facilities
as well as
health support.
People
would like to gather and live in cities
because of some facilities
in cities
such
as schools, hospitals and shopping markets. They suppose that they will ease their lives
and they do not need to commute to work places
if they are living in urban Correct your spelling
workplaces
areas
.Therfore
, Correct your spelling
Therefore
people
prefer to stay in cities
than regionl
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regional
towns
.
In addition
, the government have a huge responsibility to encourage and motivate the
individuals to Correct article usage
apply
move
to the
other places which are located away Correct article usage
apply
frem
the city by facilitating what they need to maintain their Correct your spelling
from
lives
. Therefore
government
can Add an article
the government
commenced
schools, hospitals, roads and open spaces to get the Wrong verb form
commence
people
's attraction towards the suborb
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suburb
suburbs
areas
. For instance
, if people
have every facilities
with health Change to a singular noun
facility
educations
and Fix the agreement mistake
education
job
market in regional Add an article
the job
towns
they will move
to these cities
. Therefore
, Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
can implement new projects to motivate the Correct your spelling
government
governments
people
in indirect ways to take their attraction about the small towns
.
To conclude
, people
can select where they need to live and Correct article usage
the governmet
governmet
can prompt the community by facilitating Correct your spelling
government
people
's needs in regionala
Correct your spelling
regional
areas
to attract them to transfer from cities
to small towns
. Although
large cities
have a lot of facilities
, people
can live camly
and Correct your spelling
calmly
quitely
if they have basic Correct your spelling
quietly
rwquirements
in small Correct your spelling
requirements
cities
which have developed with the help of the states.Submitted by shanikanir86 on
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