Mrs. Brett, an english speaking women whonlives in your town, has advertise for someone to help her at home for a few hours a day next summer. In your letter: 1. Suggest how youy could help her in her house. 2. say why you would like to do this work. 3. explain when you will and will not be available.

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Mrs. Johnson, I am Navjot Kaur, writing

this

letter regarding your advertisement. I would be thrilled to help you during the coming summers. since I am

also

living in the same town on a walking distance from your house.

Moreover

, I will be free from school as well because of the summer vacation. So, I would be very happy to help you with cooking and cleaning stuff. Even,I mentioned earlier that there will be vacations from school.

This

time, I am studying Canadian Health Care at Mohawk College.

Therefore

, to fulfil course requirements all students need to show some volunteer work in the summer holidays.

While

it will be my pleasure to spend my volunteer hours helping you. I would be available during weekdays from 9am to 6pm.

However

, on weekends I can only come during the evening time as I have tennis classes in the morning. If you are interested please contact me on 905683900. Waiting for your response,

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sincere, Navjot Kaur.

Submitted by navjotbenipal94 on Fri Jul 21 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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8 paragraphs

164 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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