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Global environmental issues are the responsibility of rich nations not of poorer nations Do you agree with this opinion?

#responsibility #nations
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Environment
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issues
is
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 one of the significant
concern
 in the world.
Environment
issues
 included global warming, trash in the sea,
cutting
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and cutting
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 the tree. These are all part of environmental
issues
. Environmental
issues
is
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 essential to fix it seriously. We can fix the environmental
issues
 by reducing plastic bags, increasing electric
car
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, put the items that we don't use
on
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 the bin.
Next
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The next
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 part will discuss
about
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Should global
environment
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issues
 are the responsibility of rich
nations
 not of poorer
nations
? Global environmental
issues
 are
significant
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a significant
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concern
 not only in developed
country
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countries
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 but
also
less
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in less
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 developed
country
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countries
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.
While
 is true that more developed
countries
 are generally more urbanized which
contribute
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the
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concern
 of global
environment
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issues
,
but
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less developed
countries
also
 should take responsibility
of
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 global
environment
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issues
, that's
becuase
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because
 in the world they are many
countries
that
is
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are
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 poor
nations
especially
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 in Africa and some of Latin America and Southeast Asia.
The poor
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Poor
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nations
 like less developed
countries
 can help global environmental
issues
 by introducing
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a policy
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policy
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policies
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 that related to global environmental
issues
such
 as reducing
plastic related
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plastic-related
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 items,
introduced
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and introduced
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recycle
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recycling
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part
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parts
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 for the garbage in many places in the country.
These policy
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This policy
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 can help global environmental
issues
. In conclusion, I disagree that global environmental
issues
 are solely the
responsibilities
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 of rich
nations
 because many
countries
 in the world are poor or less developed
countries
 and they can help significantly
reducing
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reduce
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 global environmental
issues
.
Environment
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issues
 are
concern
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a concern
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 in both rich and poor
nations
countries
.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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