Global environmental issues are the responsibility of rich nations not of poorer nations Do you agree with this opinion?

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issues

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one of the significant

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in the world.

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included global warming, trash in the sea,

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the tree. These are all part of environmental

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. Environmental

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essential to fix it seriously. We can fix the environmental

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by reducing plastic bags, increasing electric

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are the responsibility of rich

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? Global environmental

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not only in developed

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in Africa and some of Latin America and Southeast Asia.

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nations

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like less developed

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can help global environmental

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by introducing

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that related to global environmental

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for the garbage in many places in the country.

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can help global environmental

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. In conclusion, I disagree that global environmental

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are solely the

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of rich

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because many

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in the world are poor or less developed

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and they can help significantly

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global environmental

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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244 words

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Global environmental issues are the responsibility of rich nations not of poorer nations Do you agree with this opinion?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

These days people spend more than more time at work and less time at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Disucss both these view and give your own opinions.

Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others sy it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give yto our opinion.

‘’Prevention is better than cure.’’ Researching and treating diseases is too costly , so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. Do you agree or disagree with the given statement ?