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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it? ielts exam

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 the lifestyle was different from science 10 before,family structure,and socialization,As ,a result the personality changed,the relationships have a big lack between
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 a large space to talk behind the screen with anybody knowing ,that makes
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 the government should put strong punishments for anyone who can influence the public in negative ways like abad a blogger they should block their accounts .
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