The chart below shows the percentages of males and females with higher education qualifications in 5 countries in 2001.
The bar chart informs about the
percentage
of men
and women
that have advanced academic level
requirements in five countries in 2001. Overall
, it can be seen that Japan, Switzerland, and Britain have higher educational requirements for women
, however
The United States and Germany provide Add a comma
,however
men
for their academics. It can also
be concluded that the percentage
of males
in Switzerland was the highest among the five countries while
Germany has their women
.
Firstly
, the percentage
of advanced academic level
in Japan is almost equal between men
and women
at 30% and 25% respectively. There was a gap of 10% between males
and females in Switzerland with males
having a higher academic level
at 45%. Great Britain witnessed a slight difference in percentage
by 5% which males
having more advanced education at 35%.
On the other hand
, in The United States occurred different composition females have the upper academic level
at 40%. It was considered higher than women
with only 35%. Germany also
has the same pattern with females in the lead at about 45% followed by men
at 35%.Submitted by galihw on
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