The chart below shows the percentages of males and females with higher education qualifications in 5 countries in 2001.
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, the Linking Words
percentage
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in Japan is almost equal between Use synonyms
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at 30% and 25% respectively. There was a gap of 10% between Use synonyms
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at 45%. Great Britain witnessed a slight difference in Use synonyms
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having more advanced education at 35%.
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