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visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

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These pie charts compare the experience of some visitors during their stay
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 the Parkway Hotel in two different years, in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, we can observe that between the two
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their
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 are differences. In 2010, the rate was better than in 2005.
Firstly
, we will pay attention to 2005. In
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 year,
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approximately
,
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half of the visitors rated the customer service as satisfactory.
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, we see that
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21% of people
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thought
 that the service was quite bad. After, we observe the answer very poor and good
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 the same percentage of opinions, 15%.
Finally
, only 5% of people rated their stay as excellent.
Secondly
, we will focus on 2010. In
this
 period, the negative rates decreased, people who thought that their experience was very poor or poor was only 4% and 12% respectively. Visitors who rated the experience as satisfactory
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17%. The positive reviews were duplicated, with 28%
saiying
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saying
the customer service was excellent and
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39% saying it was good.
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