The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the estimated
literacy
rates in five regions: Africa, America, Asia, Europe, and Oceania between the years 2000 and 2004.
Overall
, Europe, America, and Oceania are areas with
literacy
rates over 90%,
while
Africa’s
overall
literacy
is less than other places.
Firstly
, 82.2% of the world's population was literate, with a higher
literacy
rate for
men
(87.2%) compared to
women
(77.3%), showing a 10% difference. In Africa, the
overall
literacy
rate is 62.5%, and there is a considerable gender difference, with 71.6% of
men
being literate and only 53.95% of
women
.
Similarly
, in Asia, the
overall
literacy
rate is 79.3%, with 85.9% for
men
and 72.5% for
women
.
On the other hand
, 98.8% of European residents are able to read and write.
Moreover
, on closer examination, both genders'
literacy
rates are almost equal, with around 99.2% for
men
and 98.5% for
women
.
In contrast
, regions like America and Oceania have approximately the same values, with around 93% of the population having basic education.
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