The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The pie charts compare the percentages of

sodium

, saturated fat,

added

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sugar

which use in typical meals in the United

State

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that can cause health problems if

they

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overuse

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. In general,

sodium

has high percentages f

uses

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in

lunch

and

dinner

.

Conversely

for

snacks

sugar

is the main

nutrients

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.

Sodium

is the biggest part of the American

lunch

and

dinner

with 29% and 43% and

after

this

saturated fat has

second

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stage with 26% for

lunch

and 37% for

dinner

. In third place for these meals added

sugar

is stayed

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and has 19% for

lunch

and 23% for

dinner

. Breakfast and

snacks

are another two meals that for breakfast added

sugar

and saturated fat have

same

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percentage which is 16% and after

them

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sodium

is take

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place with 14%. Added

sugar

in the

snacks

is

main

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part with 42% and in

second

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stage saturated fat has 21%.

Moreover

,

sodium

with 14% is the third nutrient in

snacks

.