The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The bar chart illustrates the difference in the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in a 93-year period (between 1918 and 2011).
Overall
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,starting with a big difference in the percentage of households rented and owned accommodations,these two became the same in 1971 and
then
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, the owned accommodation surpassed the rented ones.
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the graph, between 1918 and 2011 the rented accommodation gradually dropped percentage from over 85 % in 1918 to 60% in 1971 and
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it continued lowering until 2001 when a slight increase from over 30% to nearly 39% occurred.
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, the owned accommodations have risen gradually ,starting from over 20% in 1918 and continuing to grow until 2001 , when it reached its peak at approximately 70%.
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,
this
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number slightly dropped between 2001 and 2011.
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, the two households represented the same, 50% , in 1971, when they start modifying inversely proportional , opposite from the beginning.
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