The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of families who owned or rented Use synonyms
houses
in two different countries England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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Overall
, we can see two contrasting trends; the one which is about owning Linking Words
houses
witnessed a growing trend and the other a decline.
Regarding the households in owned Use synonyms
accommodation
, an upward trend is observable. At the beginning of the period only about 24% owned a house Use synonyms
then
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this
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proportion
increased moderately by 1939 to 32% and Use synonyms
then
remained the same until 1953. There was a substantial rise until 1971 when householders in rented Linking Words
houses
and owned ones were at an equal Use synonyms
proportion
of 50%. In following years, it can be easily seen Use synonyms
a
significant growth in owning Remove the article
apply
accommodation
to 60% in 1981.Use synonyms
Also
, 68 and 69 per cent in 1991 and 2001 respectively. Despite the whole trend in owning sector Linking Words
witnessed
Wrong verb form
witnessing
a
growth, a slow decline happened Correct article usage
apply
at the end
of the period.
Concerning families in rented Linking Words
accommodation
in England, about 78% in the year 1918 lived in these types of Use synonyms
accommodation
. Use synonyms
This
amount decreased by 10% until the years 1939 and 1953 when the Linking Words
proportion
of rented Use synonyms
houses
for families Use synonyms
were
at the same level. In 1961, a drastic decline happened to about 58%, after the year of the equilibrium between house owners and renters a plummet happened until 2001 to approximately 31%. Change the verb form
was
On the other hand
, as the owners declined, the renters' Linking Words
proportion
increased to about 35% Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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