The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

No doubt the rate of

crime

among youngsters is increasing rapidly nowadays and is considered one of the leading issues in the world. There could be

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of reasons behind it but the main reasons might be poverty,

crime based

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games and movies etc.

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issue is being highlighted and a lot of initiatives are being taken to overcome

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. Now

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talk

over

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the factors

due to

which theft is on

increase

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in

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youngsters. The main and most common reason is poverty. When

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adolescents do not get empathy amount of their basic needs and at

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time they cannot find any alternate way to earn money so they jump towards

crime

and start hurting people and

steal

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their precious items or

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money

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and

then

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their needs. and because they have no proper guidance and check from their homes so slowly and gradually

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small crimes they turn into giant gangsters and involve in all sought of illegal activities. Another reason for

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increase in

crime

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rate could be movies and games that involve criminal activities and

due to

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of

check

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on kids, they are exposed to these and

as a result

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a very young age they develop a criminal mind and

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in various kinds of criminal acts and find it normal for them and enjoy

practicing

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it.

However

, if we look into

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for stopping these dangerous acts. The very first thing parents should have

full time

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supervision

on

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their children and should turn on parental control on their phone to know every second update of what their kid is up to

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if they find anything suspicious, they sit with their kids and guide them how

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can be harmful to them and motivate them towards good acts and make them obedient and responsible.

Last

but not

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least

such

issue should be taken

serious

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and government needs to

be awaken

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and focus on not only

this

but all sought

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criminal activities happening around and should make sure they punish all criminals. That’s how everyone will live in peace and have harmony among them.