The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the
export
earnings in one country in 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates the change in the percentage of each category
in 2016 compared to 2015.
In general, earning
from each Correct your spelling
earnings
category
show a rise from 2015 to 2016 except textiles. Moreover
, the percentage change in values for textiles show
a huge increase.
In 2015, the first Change the verb form
shows
category
which had almost 60$ billion
of export
earning
was petroleum Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
products
. Others were less than 60$ billion
which was 58$ billion
for engineered goods, 42$ billion
for gems and jewellery, 31$ billion
for agricultural products
and the last
catrgory
, textiles which had 25$ Correct your spelling
category
billion
export
Change preposition
in export
earning
.
In 2016, two categories were higher than 60$ Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
billion
. Petroleum products
reached 62$ billion
which rised
3% and engineered goods Correct your spelling
rose
raised
rise
rised
8.5% and reached 61$ Correct your spelling
rose
raised
rise
billion
. Gems and jewellery was the only category
which declined 5.18% and reached 41$ billion
export
earning
. Agricultural Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
products
Change the verb form
were
was not change
a lot, just raised under 1%. Change the verb form
did not change
Textilies
was the Correct your spelling
Textiles
category
with the biggest rised
, 15.24% and reached 31$ Correct your spelling
rise
raised
billion
earning
.Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
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