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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the
export
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 earnings in one country in 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates the change in the percentage of each
category
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 in 2016 compared to 2015. In general,
earning
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earnings
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 from each
category
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 show a rise from 2015 to 2016 except textiles.
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, the percentage change in values for textiles
show
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 a huge increase. In 2015, the first
category
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 which had almost 60$
billion
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 of
export
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earning
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 was petroleum
products
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. Others were less than 60$
billion
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 which was 58$
billion
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 for engineered goods, 42$
billion
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 for gems and jewellery, 31$
billion
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 for agricultural
products
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 and the
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catrgory
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category
, textiles which had 25$
billion
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export
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in export
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earning
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earnings
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. In 2016, two categories were higher than 60$
billion
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. Petroleum
products
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 reached 62$
billion
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 which
rised
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rose
raised
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 3% and engineered goods
rised
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rose
raised
rise
 8.5% and reached 61$
billion
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. Gems and jewellery was the only
category
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 which declined 5.18% and reached 41$
billion
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export
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earning
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earnings
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. Agricultural
products
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was not change
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 a lot, just raised under 1%.
Textilies
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Textiles
 was the
category
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 with the biggest
rised
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rise
raised
, 15.24% and reached 31$
billion
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earning
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earnings
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, category, billion, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 4 times.
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