Increasingly individuals
inChange preposition
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present are drinking sugary
drinks
. There are several reasons why
people
in recent times
drink
too
muchChange the quantifier
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sugary
drinks
including,
inexpensiveCorrect article usage
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price of sugary
drinks
, advertisements
encourageWrong verb form
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people
to
drink
itCorrect pronoun usage
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,
,
thereReplace the word
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many measures can taken by the government to address
this
issue namely,
imposeWrong verb form
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taxes
on sugary
drinks
, and banned
ads
who promote to sugary
drinks
.
On the one hand, the primary reason why
people
consume too
muchChange the quantifier
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sugary
drinks
is the price of it is affordable. To illustrate, the cost of
drinks
containCorrect pronoun usage
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sugar
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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low
expensiveCorrect word choice
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, which
this Correct pronoun usage
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can motivate
people
to
itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
For example
,
the Correct article usage
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soft
drinks
namely, Pepsi,
colaCorrect word choice
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is Unnecessary verb
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only cost 2 $. Widespread
of Change preposition
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ads
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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promote
to Change preposition
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sugary
drinks
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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another reason why
people
drinkingWrong verb form
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sugar-based
drinks
.
For instance
, some
ads
use successful athletes
such
as
,Remove the comma
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Messi,
RonaldoCorrect word choice
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in order to persuade
people
to purchase soft
drinks
.
On the other hand
, there are different actions
canCorrect pronoun usage
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taken to tackle
this
issue. The first effective solution, the government should implement
taxes
on sugary
drinks
in order to discourage
people
to buyChange preposition
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itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
For instance
, In Saudi
there are
taxes
on sugary
drinks
25 %. Prohibited advertisements
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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promote
to Change preposition
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sugary
drinks
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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another effective measure to cope with
this
problem. To put
in other words
, the authorities could introduce harsh laws to ban commercial companies
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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make
ads
to incentivize
people
to purchase sugary
drinks
.
In conclusion, There are several causes why individuals today
drink
too
muchChange the quantifier
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sugary
drinks
including, the price of sugary
drinks
isWrong verb form
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cheap ,
advertisementsCorrect word choice
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motivateWrong verb form
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people
to
drink
itCorrect pronoun usage
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,
, there
differentAdd a missing verb
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solutions
canCorrect pronoun usage
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taken by
the Correct article usage
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lawmakers to deal with
this
issue like, impose
taxes
on sugary
drinks
, and ban
ads
who promote to sugary
drinks
.