The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
this
figure illustrates the process of producing instant noodles, it has been clearly seen material is made of flour which is stored in silos.
Overall
,
this
procedure has 8 steps mixing flour with water and oil, cooking and drying are the major steps.
To begin
with, the huge volume of flour is transferred to the storage silos after that part of them pour into a mixture, and
then
water and oil are added to them
consequently
, the dough is produced.
firstly
it is a sheet shape and the rollers transfer them to a machine which turns them into dough strips.
Following
this
noodles discs are made and they are cooked in oil and dried.
Then
they are put in cups. In
this
stage vegetables plus spices are added to every cup.
Finally
labeling and sealing are done as the
last
step.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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