Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Plastic

wastes

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could cause various pollutions to

environment

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the environment

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, which become

a serious social problems

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a serious social problem

serious social problems

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around the world.

While

some suggest that it is the obligation of commercial institutions and governments to address

such

issues, I

personaly

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personally

are

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am

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in favour of the efforts

could

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that could

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be done by individuals, which could foster a

profounding

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profound

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influence. On the one hand, governments and companies have more power to make

regulation

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regulations

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to deter the phenomena of overpackaged

products

at

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apply

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nowadays to deter unnecessary

plastic

wastes

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waste

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.

For instance

, in Taiwan, there are regulations to stop commercial

insititutions

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institutions

from providing

disposible

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disposable

containters

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containers

free of charge,

moreover

, the majority of supermarkets and restaurants offer different discounts on people who bring

reuseble

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reusable

reuseable

containters

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containers

.

On the other hand

, I

tent

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tend

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to agree that it requires

the

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apply

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effort from individuals to tackle

such

problems, first of all,

instead

of

purchase

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purchasing

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products

with attractive packages, it is better

choose

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to choose

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those in

bulk

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a bulk

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package

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packages

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, which could

encourages

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encourage

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suppliers to reduce the amount of

plastic

used in production.

For example

,

instead

of

purchase

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purchasing

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those packed vegetable

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that packed vegetable

those packed vegetables

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, people could buy those in bulk, and carry them with their own bags.

Secondly

, it is essential for consumers

bring

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to bring

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their own

containters

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containers

to pack take-out food, which could dramatically reduce the amount of

plastic

wastes

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waste

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.

For example

, many residents in Taiwan

are use

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are used

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to

drink

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drinking

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bubble tea,

instead

of using

plastic

cups, more and more people tend to offer their own

bottle

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bottles

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to prevent unnecessary

wastes

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waste

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. To summarise, it is true that

plastic

packaged

products

which are

common

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commonly

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seen nowadays could lead to

vaerious

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various

environmental hazards. Despite that it is important for authorities and commercial institutions to reduce the production of

such

products

, in my perspective, individuals could have more influence by consciously

avoid

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avoiding

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buying over-packaged

products

.