The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1983 and 2003.
The line graph illustrates how club members participated in swimming,
team
sports
and gym
activities
in UK sports
within a twenty-year period, from 1983 to 2003. Overall
, the rate of participation in team
sport and gym
activities
increased significantly over the time period while
swimming reduced dramatically within the time frame.
The participants who swam were the highest of the three sports
in 1983 with a rate of 50%. It then
fell drastically to a little above 10% by 1998 after which it stayed constant in 2003.
In 1983, the percentage of participation in team
sports
and gym
activities
was nearly 5% and around 40% respectively. Gym
activities
rose sharply to almost 40% by 1998 then
reduced gradually to 30% in 2003. Meanwhile
participation in Add a comma
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team
sports
rocketed reaching the rate of swimming at 20% between 1993 and 1998. it then
experienced a surge to over 25% in 1998 and subsequently
increased steadily to around 25% by 2003.Submitted by yahayasonde2 on
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