The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over among the US, Sweden and Japan.

The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over among the US, Sweden and Japan.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over among the US, Sweden and Japan.
The provided line graph illustrates the average
population
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of over 65 years old people history from 1940 and predicts it until 2040 among, the USA, Sweden and
Japan
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.
In contrast
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to
Japan
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, the two other countries have a constantly increasing
population
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of old people.
Japan
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had the lowest number in 1940 with around 5 million and it dropped to 4 million in 1960,
then
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stays steady until the 1980 decade.
While
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both
Japan
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's and Sweden's older populations started to be rocketing at the beginning of twenty century, In America, we had no sharp dropping or rising. The prediction shows that all countries in the chart will experience a vast
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of old people in 2040. They will be at least twice as likely as 2020. In 1940 the US had the
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and
Japan
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was
third,
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moreover
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In 2040 US will be in third position and
Japan
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gain first place and Sweden is going to stand in second position as it was in the past.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, japan with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • aged population
  • healthcare advancements
  • declining birth rates
  • elderly care
  • independence
  • quality of life
  • social cohesion
  • economic pressures
  • social policies
  • pension schemes
  • workforce participation
  • societal wellbeing
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