You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the percentage of admin people in various kinds of secondary
schools
in 2000 and 2009.
Overall
, the number of students
who attended decreased in specialist schools
in 9 years and in ,community schools
was inclined as compared to other schools
.
A quick glance at the table brings out that the percentage of voluntary-controlled schools
was the highest, 52%. It is a slight decrease every year and in the last
year 20% of students
admission in 2009. Furthermore
, the proportion of grammar school admits students
declined from 24% to 12% between 2000 and 2009.
Moving on the proportion of specialist Schools
was 12% in 2000 and fell rapidly to 10% in 2009. Moreover
, community schools
' percentage of students
increased from 12% to 58% from 2000 to 2009.Submitted by kaurj8901 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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