The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The given process diagram depicts how ceramic
pots
are produced.
Overall
, there are a number of steps indulged in order to make ceramic pots
. All the steps are interlinked with each other, omission of any step
may halt the whole diagram.
After analysing it can be seen clearly that in the initial step
, raw material is dug up with the aid of a digger. In the subsequent step
, raw material is delivered to factories by truck. In the following step
, it is crushed two times with a crusher. Before being moulded in the moulder, it is mixed with water. Then
, let dry for 4 to 6 hours.
Probing further
, clay pots
are assembled. After that clay pots
are put under temperature over 1000 degrees Celsius. After
this
process colour is added into clay pots
. Ultimately, after colour firing, pots
are manufactured.Submitted by MANJOT on
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