You know that a building company is planning to build new houses in immediate proximity to your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter – Say how you found out about their plan – Describe how you feel about it – Explain what you hope that they do about it

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am writing
this
letter is your plan to build new houses near my place. I got a letter from your company that says the duration of
construction
, and your working time.
Although
the
construction
needs 6 to 8 months and working from 9 AM until 5 PM and do not have a holiday. I would like to express my happiness and excitement about the new houses that your company will build next to my house
,
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because it will make more interaction with new neighbours.
Moreover
, your working time is from 9 AM until 5 PM which suits me, because I am still working in the central of the city and I do not get intruded about the
construction
noises. Because your company do not have a holiday working time, I would like to suggest the
construction
plan on Sunday or a public holiday. Despite the period of the
construction
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do not have a free day, I would like to you always maintain their physic to minimize the incident from working. Thank you for your attention to my suggestion. I hope
this
planning going well. Yours sincerely, William
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