You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter mention: Where have you moved to? What problem are you facing regarding the Banks communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address?

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Dear Sir, My name is Baljinder Singh and I am writing to inquire about

to change

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my mailing

address

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because I have

move

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one

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from one

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place to another place. Recently, I moved to Ludhiana for some personal

reason

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but, I do not update my new communication

address

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bank

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the bank

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and some other places

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that

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apply

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house no.23 Red Avenue, gate no.4, Ludhiana, Punjab.

Few

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months ago, I

had

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applied

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my new credit

card

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through

the

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net banking.

However

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this

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credit

card

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does not receive

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me because you sent

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apply

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this

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card

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my old

address

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. It is my humble request to re-sent my

card

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my new mailing

address

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as soon as possible. Please feel free to contact me via email. [email protected], if you need any other information. Thank you so much for

you

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time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Baljinder Singh

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

141 words

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