You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter mention: Where have you moved to? What problem are you facing regarding the Banks communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address?

Dear Sir, My name is Baljinder Singh and I am writing to inquire about
to change
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my mailing
address
because I have
move
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one
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place to another place. Recently, I moved to Ludhiana for some personal
reason
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but, I do not update my new communication
address
in
bank
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the bank
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and some other places
that
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is
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house no.23 Red Avenue, gate no.4, Ludhiana, Punjab.
Few
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months ago, I
had
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applied
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my new credit
card
through
the
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net banking.
However
,
this
credit
card
does not receive
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me because you sent
to
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this
card
on
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to
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my old
address
. It is my humble request to re-sent my
card
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my new mailing
address
as soon as possible. Please feel free to contact me via email. [email protected], if you need any other information. Thank you so much for
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time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Baljinder Singh
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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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