The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.
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The bar chart provides information about the Finnish residents who spent millions of
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types between 1995 and 2004. In general, it can be seen that even though the popularity of the local landline has decreased, it has been the most preferred calling platform of the three given categories by the given period.
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with, local landline calls were the highest throughout the period, rising from 12000
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in 1995 to over 16000
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in 2001. After peaking at around 17000
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in that year, these calls had fallen back to the 1995 amount by 2004. Turning to National and International landline calls, 6000
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minutes
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were recorded in 1995 and
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grew steadily to 10500
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at the end
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of the period,
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the growth slowed down in the
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two years. There was
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a dramatic increase in mobile calls from 250 to 9800
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when mobile phone use tripled.
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