Buying goods and service online is very popular and has many advantages, but it is not always safe to shop online. do you think the advantages gained from shopping online outweigh the disadvantages.

1.My family owned 2

apartment

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apartments

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which

were

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was

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located in

binh

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the binh

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thanh district near

Saigons

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Saigon

river

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River

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. I live with my parents and my young brother; we are not a big family so most of the furniture in our 2

home

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homes

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was just basic needs to our life.

In the

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The

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first home is the main accommodation, we have 4 rooms and a balcony for

clothesline

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a clothesline

the clothesline

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. The biggest room in it is the

bed room

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bedroom

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where we all shared it to sleep in, it

also

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is also

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a

place

for me to study and relax.

In the

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second home, is a

place

where my family can use to work

peace fully

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peacefully

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when we need it has a printer to serve my

dad

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dad's

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business and my

school

project and it was filled with my

dad

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dad's

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books, it was an enormous collection of books and my

dad

enjoys reading them in his free time, it still has a bathroom and a

tivi

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time

with a sofa for us to relax. 2.

i

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I

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live happily with my parent and my brothers, me and my brother were all

being

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apply

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raised by love and kindness from my

mom

and

dad

. My parents are

both

44 years old, my

mom

is a housewife and my

dad

work

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works

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for a construction company named Ricons he’s an architect my brother and

i

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I

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are

both

pupils and we

both

just graduated elementary

school

and secondary

school

, I will study at

trung

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Trung

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vương high

school

soon and he will study at cu chinh lan secondary

school

. 3. so

i

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I

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didn’t live in hcm city in the first

place

, I was born in lam dong,

my

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and my

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parent

are

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is

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both

citizen

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citizens

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from

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of

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dalat

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Dalat

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, I was born in 2008 and back

then

I live with my

mom

and my grandparent, my

dad

went to

hcm

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him

city for a job with

better

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a better

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salary to raise my family so he had to

left

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leave

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dalat

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Dalat

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, we couldn’t come with him because back

then

we didn’t have much money and it was hard to live in a

place

where we got no clue about it back

then

. My

mom

stayed in

dalat

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Dalat

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and we live in my

mom

’s grandparent house, my

dad

come

visit

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to visit

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me

for

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apply

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3-4 times a year. And after 2 years of

hardworking

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,hardworking

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my

dad

has

finally

earned enough money to buy an apartment for my family to live and he has a fine job too. In 2010 my family came to

hcm

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Hcm

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city and till now after 13 years we still live in it,

its

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it

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was not the best but

its

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it

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was the finest accommodation we ever live in.