The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the percentage of
the
Correct article usage
apply
Men
and Women
in different area
of employment that has different in 1986, 1996 and 2006.
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Overall
, whatever
Correct word choice
whether
men
or women
in
Add a missing verb
are in
different
area of employment Add an article
a different
that
the employee trends was similar in these Correct pronoun usage
apply
years
.
The sheet display
the four types of Change the verb form
displays
the
occupation for Correct article usage
apply
men
and women
. Catering, it has 26 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
women
work
in this
job
in 1986, 1996 and 2006. But for men
, it was respective 16, 22 and 22 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
people
Change preposition
of people
work
in this
job
in these years
. Banking, the work
people
has
increased in 1986, 1996 and 2006. The Change the verb form
have
men
employees in these years
was
Change the verb form
were
respective
11%, 20% and 21. And the Change the word
respectively
women
has
12%, 16% and 19% respectively. Change the verb form
have
Manufacturing
industry has many Add an article
The manufacturing
people
work
in Wrong verb form
working
this
job
in 1986 that
has 32% Correct pronoun usage
apply
men
and 18% women
in this
job
. But in 1996 and 2006, the number of people
was reduced whatever
Correct word choice
whether
men
or women
. The men
has 21% and 17% respective
in 1996 and 2006, and the Change the word
respectively
women
has 12% and 6% respectively. The last
occupation in the sheet was education, the men
has 13%, 14% and 15% respectively in 1986, 1996 and 2006, and the women
has 33%, 35% and 38% respectively in three different years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, years, work, job, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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