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The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of working men and women in different areas of employment in one country in 1986, 1996 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the percentage of
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Men
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Women
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 of employment that has different in 1986, 1996 and 2006.
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,
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men
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women
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in
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different
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a different
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 area of employment
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the employee trends was similar in these
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. The sheet
display
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 the four types of
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occupation for
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women
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. Catering, it has 26
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women
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work
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job
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 in 1986, 1996 and 2006. But for
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, it was respective 16, 22 and 22
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per cent
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people
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work
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job
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 in these
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. Banking, the
work
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people
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has
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 increased in 1986, 1996 and 2006. The
men
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 employees in these
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was
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respective
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respectively
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 11%, 20% and 21. And the
women
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has
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 12%, 16% and 19% respectively.
Manufacturing
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The manufacturing
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 industry has many
people
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work
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job
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 in 1986
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has 32%
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 and 18%
women
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job
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. But in 1996 and 2006, the number of
people
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 was reduced
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whether
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men
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women
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. The
men
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 has 21% and 17%
respective
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 in 1996 and 2006, and the
women
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 has 12% and 6% respectively. The
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 occupation in the sheet was education, the
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 has 13%, 14% and 15% respectively in 1986, 1996 and 2006, and the
women
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 has 33%, 35% and 38% respectively in three different
years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, years, work, job, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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