You recently stayed at a hotel and were dissatisfied with the service you received. Write a letter to the hotel manager, explaining the situation and expressing your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: • Describe the problem and the details of your stay. • Explain how it affected your experience. • Suggest possible solutions or actions that you would like the manager to take. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the the
service I received at your Remove the redundancy
apply
hotel
, where I stayed from 5th to 7th June during my visit to the city.
The problems started just after I checked in. I found out that there was no running water in the sink. I immediately informed the hotel
management about the issue. They consoled me by saying that the maintenance worker is one
his way and asked me to use water from the bucket they provided for the time being. I thought Correct your spelling
on
it’s
fine as long as it will be fixed in Wrong verb form
it was
a
hour or two. Change the article
an
However
no one showed up to fix my problems. I report repeatedly and got the same answer. That was so frustrating Add a comma
,However
to
say the least.
Add the comma(s)
,to
Due to
lack
of water, my bathroom was stinking to the point that I couldn’t use it anymore. I didn’t get to Correct article usage
a lack
bath
during my entire stay. I had to use Correct your spelling
bathe
public
bathroom near the Correct article usage
a public
hotel
. My experience of the whole trip turned out to be bitter due to
this
. I wasn’t expecting such
thing
from a Correct article usage
a thing
hotel
of your reputation.
I would like to make few
suggestions. First of all, you could hire a Correct article usage
a few
full time
maintenance worker so that they are available all day. Add a hyphen
full-time
Secondly
, you should make sure that all the amenities are working before renting out a room. I hope you look into the issue. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
John DoeSubmitted by sth.kumar2010 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite