With the recent improvement to the internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is it a good or bad thing. Discuss both views.

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There is no doubt that the invention of

internet

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the internet

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has

lead

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led

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the

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apply

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changes

the

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in the

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ways how

customers

gather information about the things and

service

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services

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they intend to purchase. I would argue that

this

is a negative trend, and

this

essay will support my

opinion

via a discussion of

the

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both sides.

To begin

with the positives, one of the most beneficial

aspect

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for

business

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businesses

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which

recieve

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receive

reviews from their

customers

is that they are allowed to catch the real voice

from

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their users.

This

means that they may become more able to adapt

the

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to the

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needs of their users than they used to be before they

incooporate

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incorporate

incorporated

the

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their

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opinion

from them. As for the

customers

this

trend to offer them

platform

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a platform

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where they can speak out

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and speak

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speak out

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apply

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their feeling towards

products

and service

which

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in which

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they spend their money

also

enable them to have insight about goods and service before they decide to buy them.

For instance

, a person is able to know about the quality of a clothing's textile by reading a review and

decide

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deciding

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if they buy from it without physically

touch

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touching

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it.

Nevertheless

this

trend to publish customer's

opinion

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opinions

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does present some problems. In terms of companies, they can get not only good comments but

also

critisism

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criticism

While

advertisemsnt

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for instance
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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

372 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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