The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The bar graph
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
number
of British non full-time workers who graduated either university or post-university in 2008.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that although
the number
of post
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postgraduates
graduates
were
insignificant in comparison with Change the verb form
was
graduates
, we can see a similar tendency from both the figures.
To begin
with, the the
most popular Remove the redundancy
apply
distination
after graduation among both university Correct your spelling
destination
graduates
and post
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post-graduates
graduates
was further
education in the UK in 2008. While
the exact number
of them was 29,665 in the data of the former, there were 2,725 of the latter in this
section. At the same time, there were certain amounts of students who broke into part-time occupation, which was 17,735 for those from university and 2,535 for those from post-university.
On the other hand
, 16,235 graduates
was
jobless, whose Change the verb form
were
number
was more than tenfold than the figure of enemployed
post-graduate. Interestingly, 3500 Correct your spelling
unemployed
graduates
chose to work as a volunteer, whereas
only 345 past-graduate who
decided to work for no pay.Correct pronoun usage
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