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The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
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The bar graph
illustrate
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 the
number
 of British non full-time workers who graduated either university or post-university in 2008.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that
although
 the
number
 of
post
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postgraduates
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graduates
were
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 insignificant in comparison with
graduates
, we can see a similar tendency from both the figures.
To begin
 with, the
the
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most popular
distination
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destination
 after graduation among both university
graduates
 and
post
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post-graduates
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graduates
 was
further
 education in the UK in 2008.
While
 the exact
number
 of them was 29,665 in the data of the former, there were 2,725 of the latter in
this
 section. At the same time, there were certain amounts of students who broke into part-time occupation, which was 17,735 for those from university and 2,535 for those from post-university.
On the other hand
, 16,235
graduates
was
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 jobless, whose
number
 was more than tenfold than the figure of
enemployed
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unemployed
 post-graduate. Interestingly, 3500
graduates
 chose to work as a volunteer,
whereas
 only 345 past-graduate
who
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decided to work for no pay.
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