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The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
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 the
number
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 of British non full-time workers who graduated either university or post-university in 2008.
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, what stands out from the graph is that
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 the
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 of
post
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postgraduates
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graduates
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were
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 insignificant in comparison with
graduates
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, we can see a similar tendency from both the figures.
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most popular
distination
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destination
 after graduation among both university
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post-graduates
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graduates
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further
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 education in the UK in 2008.
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 of them was 29,665 in the data of the former, there were 2,725 of the latter in
this
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 section. At the same time, there were certain amounts of students who broke into part-time occupation, which was 17,735 for those from university and 2,535 for those from post-university.
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, 16,235
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 jobless, whose
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 was more than tenfold than the figure of
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unemployed
 post-graduate. Interestingly, 3500
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 chose to work as a volunteer,
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 only 345 past-graduate
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decided to work for no pay.
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