The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant.
The chart describes the data about
families
weekly Change noun form
families'
family's
expenditure
prospects in 1968 and in 2018 The most significant spent
rate is on food with a 35% ratio in the year 1968 Housing and clothing come next with the same prospect of 10% of the weekly income. Replace the word
spending
Expenditure
on leisure, transport personal goods
and household goods
are almost same
percentage, the former one is slightly more Correct article usage
the same
Lastly
, spent rates on fuel and the others are recorded the least with a U in the year of que
Turning to 2018, Correct your spelling
queue
food
Correct article usage
the food
expenditure
of families had dropped dramatically to a percentage between 15 to 20. On the other
hand
housing Add a comma
,hand
spent
had Replace the word
spending
rised
significantly Correct your spelling
risen
raised
rise
with
an almost 20% slightly more than feed expenditures. The most crucial rise was recorded Change preposition
by
on
Change preposition
in
lesure
Correct your spelling
leisure
spent
rates. It Replace the word
spending
had
soared Unnecessary verb
apply
abut
10 in 50 years Transportation Correct your spelling
about
expeditures
comes after and followed by Household Correct your spelling
expenditures
goods
and the one categories respetively
Correct your spelling
respectively
Last
three had
remained the least just as in 1968 which Unnecessary verb
apply
is
fuel and power clothing and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
footware
and personal Correct your spelling
footwear
goods
.
Overall
, weekly expenditure
averages of families had dramatically changed over 50 years Some spent
rates had remained the same Replace the word
spending
whereas
some of the alterations are quite Correct your spelling
noticeable
noticable
Correct your spelling
noticeable
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rised" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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