The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are some differences between 2007 and 2010 hospital
road
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access.
First,
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the
bus
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stop is relocated from the east
side
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of the hospital building to the right in front of the hospital building. To accommodate traffic including buses going in and out of the hospital, three roundabouts were built, one in front of the building, one connected to the main city
road
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and one replacing the previous
bus
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stop.
In addition
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, all cars including staff used to be parked on the east
side
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in front of the building. After relocation, the public car park is located on the east
side
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across from the main building,
while
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the staff car park remained at the same place. To prevent traffic on hospital roads because of
bus
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and car parking, the
bus
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stop is connected to the building roundabout and the city
road
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roundabout.
This
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layout is used in order to prevent
bus
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parking on the
side
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of Hospital
Road
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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