The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
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illustrates the average weekly spending by families in two years: 1968 and 2018. It is clear from the
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that the average of food in 1989 is a higher
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in 2018 about 17%.
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what is shown in the
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, the rate of households in two years is the same rate. After that, the
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of leisure directly increased in 2018 from 9% to 22%.
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, the
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of housing is go up to 19% in 2018. what is more. The
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of transport sharply rise in 2018 .
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, it is clear from the
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that the average of clothing and footwear slightly fell down from 1968 to 2018 about 5% . What is more, the average of personal goods and fuel and power are the same rate in 2018 but in 1968 the average of these increased from 4% to 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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