The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people find that

employees

only aim to earn

money

from businesses and not be essential to being responsible for society.

While

I accept that

this

perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that labour is necessary to have social responsibilities. On the one hand, there are lots of competition in real life almost on what way they follow to earn

money

. Because of surviving in a competitive world ,

employees

have to find out plenty of

ways

to reach the highest goal in

businesses

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.

Such

as when investors want to invest in a company that they think can be improved in the future or can help them earn more

money

, they must get different

ways

to reach that goal and certainly not only find that company or employers so they have to be on time in the right situation. ,

Also

companies

should invest in improvement and facilities .

While

employees

were not having enough equipment, some

companies

did not have any improvement for their staff. So when

companies

invest in their

employees

and facilities , their staff will have more opportunities of making

money

more

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easier and reach their

goal

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faster than they had done before.

On the other hand

, if the

employees

had some problem or do something wrong with the law, they should be responsible for society. Some people will use the reason that they only want to earn

money

but for doing lots of bad

ways

. They should have a suitable smiting from the law and government. ,

Also

there are many

ways

to earn

money

by stealing another production or idea . They will sell them to other

companies

to make their own payment.

Then

many

companies

are destroying the environment by industrial action without controlling the emission which they release into the area. They do not care about what they are causing and they only want to reach their goal as fast as responsible. And governments must deal with these problems by making more serious rules to prevent

this

thing

happened

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. In conclusion, making

money

is the main point for businesses but

i

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believe that

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should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.