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the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories

the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories
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The bar chart illustrates the gross amount of time(minutes in
billion
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) of calls made in the UK in 3 categories(Local, National and International , and mobile) through the years, 1995 to 2002.
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, the chart depicts that the number of local phone calls was the highest in 1999(exactly 90
billion
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) followed by 1998, just under 90. The lowest number was mobile conversations in 1995, considerably less than 10 hundred million. One noticeable trend was the stable increase in National and International calls
as well as
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 cell phone conversations from 1995 to 2002. The local calls over the fixed line underwent a steady incline from a little over 70
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 in 1995, reaching a peak in nearly half a decade. After which, they experienced a smooth decrease over three years to marginally above 70
billion
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. Cell phone conversations
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 to National and International fixed lines attained the most amount of time in 2002, just above 60
billion
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 and about 45
billion
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 respectively.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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