The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The chart illustrates the first ten countries which produce and consumed electricity in the year 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that China and the United States were the major producers and consumers among others, while
, the Republic of Korea had the last
position.
Regarding the first two countries, the difference between the production of electricity and its consumption was partial in China with 5,398 and 5,322 billion
kWh
respectively. The United States produced 4,099 billion
kWh
which 3,866 of this
amount is utilized by consumers.
While
the production and consumption of China and the United States were more than 3 thousand, the gap between them and others was abundant because others’ manufacturing and usage were about one thousand or less. Russia, Japan, and India were at the third,
fourth, and fifth positions respectively by a few differences in their amount of production and use. Also
, the gap between Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany was almost less than 50 billion
kWh
in their inputs and outputs of electricity. Finally
, Korea produced approximately 485 billion
kWh
and used 449 billion
kWh
of it in that year.Submitted by parianabiloo78 on
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