Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport Write an email to your friend, in you email 1 recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn. 2 explain how your friend could learn this sport 3 suggest that you both learn this sport together

Dear Tina, I'm delighted to have received your letter. I know you are planning to choose a suitable activity for your daily routine. I highly recommend you are planning
badminton
with me. As you know, I do a variety of exercises and
badminton
is a good option for you. It has a beneficial on your physical and mental well-being.
Badminton
is a beginner-friendly activity. Because it doesn't need many professional skills and is easy to start.
Additionally
, it will be helpful for our bodies.
This
sport can improve our muscle strength
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and balance ability. flexibility and cooperation with team workers. At the same time, you can join any group you want within
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enjoyable team competition. It
also
can boost your heart and lung function, and lower your blood pressure. Why not join us? In order to learn
badminton
, we can rent a space in the nearby gym. It will cost 2 dollars per week and not be expensive. You only need to prepare your sportswear, and comfortable shoes as well. All of these are affordable and easily acceptable. I'll introduce some new friends that we can train together and enjoy the fun. If you decide to join us, let me know as soon as possible. I can't wait for
this
journey with you. Best wishes, Joyce.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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