The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps illustrate the location of roads and accessibility to a hospital during the period Use synonyms
of
2007 and 2010.
Change preposition
between
Overall
, the Linking Words
road
infrastructure has developed over the given period, Use synonyms
two
roundabouts have been added and a Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
was broadened and divided Use synonyms
in
sections.
In the year 2007, the Hospital Change preposition
into
Road
led to the main hospital, and there were six bus stops along the Use synonyms
road
. During the same year, the was a Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
used by staff and Use synonyms
public
.
Correct article usage
the public
On the contrary
, in 2010, in the north and the south parts of Hospital Linking Words
Road
Use synonyms
two
roundabouts were added. In the meantime, there was a bus station in the west and a Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
for staff Use synonyms
in
the east Change preposition
on
from
Hospital Change preposition
of
Road
.
It can be Use synonyms
also
noted that Linking Words
Use synonyms
car
Correct article usage
the car
park
near the Use synonyms
road
was modernised by separating Use synonyms
Correct pronoun usage
it in
in
Change preposition
into
two
different locations for staff and public usage. The public Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
was located to the east of the city hospital. Use synonyms
According to
the maps, during the given period, the Ring Linking Words
Road
around the hospital hadn’t experienced significant changes.Use synonyms
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