The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram illustrates that in the process of instant
noodles
, there are 8 stages of
this
production.
Overall
, it is observed that
the first step is
collecting the flour from storage silos by a truck, and the procedure finishes with packaging the prepared
noodles
into beautiful wrappers.
Initially
, the method
commence
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with collecting the flour and
send
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sending
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it for mixing the water and oil
buy
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by
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a mixer.
Moreover
, the machine contains all the ingredients and
prepare
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prepares
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a dough sheet with the help of rollers. In the next stage, dough sheets
converted
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into dough strips to make noodle discs and fried in a deep heat cooking oil.
Furthermore
, store
noodles
discs for drying.
In addition
to
this
, the seventh step is adding vegetables, spices, and
noodles
into the cups.
Finally
, the procedure is ready for labelling and sealing before being delivered to consumers
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