The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the map below shows the layout of a
town
named Garlson, where two possible sites are marked for a supermarket establishment. overall
, it can be seen that the second site is more convenient than the first.
site 1 is located in the countryside, in the north of the town
, where the population is 10 thousand. it is surrounded by industries and has one main road and one railway route. also
, the nearest housing society is about 12km away from it.
in contrast
, site 2 is in the heart of the town
center
, covered by multiple industries. Change the spelling
centre
in addition
, it has access to 2 main roads, 2 small towns( both in a 10-25 km radius), and one railway line that runs through the town
center
. Change the spelling
centre
also
, it is located in a no-traffic zone, making it a preferred place for the public to go to. besides
, it is closer to the majority of the population of the town
(about 45,000 people).Submitted by xx00 on
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