The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The provided pie charts give information about how the proportion of
water
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is allocated for industrial, agricultural or domestic
use
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in North and South
America
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, in Europe, in Africa
as well as
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in central and
south east
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southeast
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Asia
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. It is
clearly
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from the charts that the most significant field is the agricultural one in South
America
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, Africa and in south and east
Asia
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, whilst the countries that
use
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water
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most for industrial purposes are Europe and North
America
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.
According to
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the former field, Central
Asia
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is
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peaked with agricultural uses in Central
Asia
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cover
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the
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88% of the whole
piewater
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pie water
porewater
uses, followed by the respective number in Africa and
south east
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Asia
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with 84% and 81% respectively. + mention the rest numbers as well
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, it seems from the pies that in Europe and in North
America
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use
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the
water
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is used more for Industrial purposes with the percentage of 53% and 48% being recorded respectively. + mention the other numbers as well
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, the domestic field
it
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covers only
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19% in South
America
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,
whereas
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in the rest of the countries it reaches the percentage
of
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which
range
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ranges
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from 7% to 15%.
Overall
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, as the pie charts demonstrate,
water
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is employed for different purposes globally, with
those
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of
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agriculture being more popular in the developing regions of the world,
while
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the
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industrial
use
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is more dominant in the rest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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