You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart depicts the yearly
income
shown in US Dollars for language
-related jobs such
as Interpreter
, Translator
and Language
Teacher
occurred in Mexico, Dubai, Paris, Munich and Toronto
.
Overall
, Toronto
became the city with the highest-paid Interpreter
and Language
Teacher
while
in contrast
, Mexico was the lowest income
place for all roles.
To begin
with, Interpreter
in Toronto
had an annual income
of about USD
80.000 which made them the highest rate in all roles and cities. Then
, Translator
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Translators
Language
Teacher
in Fix the agreement mistake
Teachers
Toronto
were getting the same value approximately above USD
60.000. Next,
Interpreter
in Munich would get not less than USD
70.000 whilst Translator
generates income
equally with Toronto
and Language
Teacher
got yearly paid at exactly USD
60.000. Furthermore
, Interpreter
in Paris earn the same amount as Fix the agreement mistake
Interpreters
Translator
by more than Fix the agreement mistake
Translators
USD
60.000, whereas
Language
Teacher
are far lower by approximately more than Fix the agreement mistake
Teachers
USD
40.000. Subsequently
, Interpreter
and Fix the agreement mistake
Interpreters
Language
Teacher
in Dubai had similar annual rates of Fix the agreement mistake
Teachers
USD
60.000 while
Translator
got slightly lower by Fix the agreement mistake
Translators
USD
50.000 per year. Lastly
, Mexico was the lowest income
for every role compared to all cities where Interpreter
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Interpreters
Translator
and English Fix the agreement mistake
Translators
Teacher
earn an annual Fix the agreement mistake
Teachers
income
below USD
20.000.Submitted by raymondgandi on
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