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Band 7.5

You recently missed a flight. You think this was the fault of the airlines. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter - explain why you believe the airline was at fault - describe the impact this had on your journey - say what you want the airline to do. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin you letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
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 letter finds you well. I am writing
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 letter to express dissatisfaction regarding my
flight
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. Allow me to elaborate on the problem.
Firstly
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,
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 is my first experience choosing your airline
company
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 for my trip, my
flight
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 was scheduled on June 22nd,2022, departed from Paris at 2AM and arrived in Japan at 3PM with
flight
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 number SA123.
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, your airline
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 didn't provide any announcement about the early departure.
Therefore
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, I missed my
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.
Furthermore
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, I have already prepared my travel plan ahead, including the hotel that I booked and the tickets for tourist attractions.
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, I
also
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 promise to meet my friend but I have no choice but to cancel all the occasions
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 inconvenience. As
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compensation, I would like the
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 to investigate
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 issue promptly and kindly request the airline
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 to cover all my costs for my trip.
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, I suggested that your
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 could be more professional when informing the
reschedule
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flight
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 as fast as possible. I look forward to your understanding and reply.
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Your
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 Sincerely, Jun
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