Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: -Introduce yourself. -Explain what the problem is. - Suggest solutions to the problem.

Dear
Mr.
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Art, I am
wiriting
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complaint
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about the noise
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disturbing me by construction on the street. I am studying for
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the weekend and I need
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. As you know, the construction on the street
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some noise make disturbing to me. I just only need
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days for
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the weekend.
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, please refrain from doing things
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time until I completed my studies. Once
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, I understand that your work is important.
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you help me keep silent. After I finish my studies. You can return to normal activities. I trust
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matter will be resolved soon. Yours faithfully, Hieu
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