the graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005
The line graph
demonstrate
the spending on food in four countries from 1995 to 2005.
Change the verb form
demonstrates
Over all
, all the countries Correct your spelling
Overall
was
increased in Unnecessary verb
apply
period
Correct article usage
the period
time
. Germany and France Change preposition
of time
is
higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
two
countries and Correct article usage
the two
then
Italy and Austria is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
lowest
.
With regards to spending on food in Germany started at 80% and Correct article usage
the lowest
then
increased to 90% in 1999. However
, it slight
decreased to 85% but it reached a peak Change the word
slightly
ti
95% in 2005. Correct your spelling
to
Likewise
, France had 55% in the first year and climb up to 70% in 2001. It remain stable between 2001 and 2005 and increased to 75% in the last
year.
In contrast
, Italy stood at 50% in 1995 and then
increased to 55% in 1997. In 1999, it just had 50% but it rose to 62% in 2005. The last
country is Austria accounted for 30%in 1995 and increased to 40% in 1999. It remain unchanged from 1999 to 2001 and significant
rose Change the word
significantly
ti
61% in 2005.Correct your spelling
to
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