the graph show the amount of money spent on book in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph describes the cost had been paid
on
books in four different Change preposition
for
country
from 1995 to 2005.
Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
, we can see Germany was the highest in
Change preposition
of
four
countries. Correct article usage
the four
Whereas
Austria was the lowest but in the last
period it was higher than Italy. The amount of money spent on books was increase
sharply in four countries.
Looking at the figure in Wrong verb form
increased
further
detail , we can see Germany started at 80 million $,after which it experienced a
growth to 90 million $ in 1999. And Remove the article
apply
next
4 years I Correct article usage
the next
was fell
slowly to roughly 85 Change the verb form
fell
millions
$, before ending the period at 95 Change to singular
million
millions
$. The amount of France started at roughly 55 Change to singular
million
millions
$ , after which it Change to singular
million
rocket
to roughly 75 Wrong verb form
rocketed
millions
$ in Change to singular
million
ending
period.
Turning to the remaining, Italy started at 50 million $ and next 4 years It Add an article
the ending
wasn’t change
. In 2005 it jumped quickly to around 60 to 70 Change the verb form
wasn’t changed
wasn’t changing
millions
$, after which it experienced a rise to 40 Change to singular
million
millions
$ in 1999. Next 2 years it Change to singular
million
wasn’t change
. In 2005 it went quickly to 70 Change the verb form
wasn’t changed
wasn’t changing
millions
$ was higher than Italy.Change to singular
million
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