the graph show the amount of money spent on book in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

the graph show the amount of money spent on book in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph describes the cost had been paid
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books in four different
country
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from 1995 to 2005.
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, we can see Germany was the highest
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four
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countries.
Whereas
Austria was the lowest but in the
last
period it was higher than Italy. The amount of money spent on books was
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sharply in four countries. Looking at the figure in
further
detail , we can see Germany started at 80 million $,after which it experienced
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growth to 90 million $ in 1999. And
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4 years I
was fell
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slowly to roughly 85
millions
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$, before ending the period at 95
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$. The amount of France started at roughly 55
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$ , after which it
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to roughly 75
millions
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$ in
ending
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period. Turning to the remaining, Italy started at 50 million $ and next 4 years It
wasn’t change
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. In 2005 it jumped quickly to around 60 to 70
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$, after which it experienced a rise to 40
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$ in 1999. Next 2 years it
wasn’t change
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. In 2005 it went quickly to 70
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$ was higher than Italy.
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