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The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table compares and contrasts data on the
poverty
 number in three different American sectors, namely
California
,
Utah
 and
Florida
.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that there are more young residents in
poverty
 in
Utah
,
while
 those over 60 years old are more prevailed in
Florida
.
Also
, average income per person and
population
 below
poverty
Correct article usage
the poverty
show examples
 line categories in
California
 are generally highest in
California
,
whereas
 the opposite pattern is true for
Utah
. First of all, in the category of young people under 18 living in
poverty
,
Utah
's number far outnumbers all other states, at 28%, followed by
California
 and
Florida
 by 17% and 16%, respectively.
Secondly
, in terms of those aged over 60,
Florida
 holds a lion's share of 23% of
population
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the population
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,
California
 stays at a relatively lower percentage at 13%, yet
Utah
 witnessed a small proportion exactly at 8%. With regards to average income,
California
 was recorded at $23,000,
Florida
 slightly lower at $22,000, with $17,000 of average salary per
Utah
 resident.
Furthermore
,
California
 has the largest
population
 below
poverty
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the poverty
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 line,
in contrast
,
Utah
's underdevelopment
population
 stands the least.
Additionally
, the category of
population
 below
poverty
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the poverty
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 line in
Florida
 was higher than
Utah
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in Utah
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, but smaller than
California
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in California
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, with 12%.
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