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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the provided figures
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 the proportion of the
consumtion
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consumption
for
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 a variety of fuels to operate
the
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electric
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 during 2005 among five Asian states.
Overall
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, it is evident from the shown numbers that across the year every country has a different utilization
to
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 fuels to operate the
electric
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electricity
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.
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, the highest amount of consumption for every fuel product and every country,
while
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 Malaysia recorded the
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highest
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 proportion of Coal&lignite at 61,
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 the
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 time Singapora accounted
the
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 highest consumption
for
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 the same fuel at 42. meanwhile,
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 registered the most peaked utilization
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 Petroleum products by 36 in comparison with others.
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 , Japan gives the highest consumerism for Nuclear which at 49.
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, South Korea the only country focus
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 clean energy as per the demonstrated numbers when contributed by 48.
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, Japan and
Singapora
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Singapore
 give the same proportion of petroleum products and Hydro & wind consumerism
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accounted
account
 for 3.

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